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stolen from WingsThePhoenix and NeonRacoon 
Gonna be using:
Moonlight by Enchantedprey5280
And soon to become Oc:
Possible Main Human oc by rockythebunny13

ROUND ONE:
MOONLIGHT STAR

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.

2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon. 

3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.

4. [ ] They are physically strong. 

5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour. 

6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour.

7. [ ] This eye colour happens to be white. 

8. [ ] Their eyes change colour. (They change depending on her form)

9. [X] They have wings.

10. [ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.

11. [ ] They are immortal.

12. [ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.

13. [ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.

14. [ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

15. [ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc.

16. [ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.

17. [ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.

18. [X] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. (Next round of element of harmony, haven't got around to making the comic I've been planning to do SINCE 2 YEARS AGO THO)

19. [X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. (Yeeep by me XD)

20. [] They are a healer. 

21. [ ] They are from a very rich/royal family. 

22. [] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background. 

23. [ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.

24. [ ] They ran away from home.  

25. [ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

26. [ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. 

27. [X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. (PEGASIS)

28. [ ] They never knew their parents.

29. [ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.

30. [ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. 

31. [X] They have lots of friends/no friends. 

32. [X] They are emo/cutesy. (Shes cute to me >w<(\ )

33. [ ] They look much younger/older than they really are. 

34. [ ] They are currently in a relationship.

35. [/] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. (Has morals to become better at like, everything XD but she doesn't really spread them around)

36. [ ] They have a mental disorder.

37. [ ] They have an emotional disorder. 

38. [ ] They struggle to stay sane.

39. [ ] They are a psycho.

40. [ ] They have multiple personalities.

41. [/] They are very intelligent. (She derps up like derpy sometimes, not everyone is perfect XD)

42. [ ] They have hallucinations.

43. [ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 

44. [X] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet. (Yep she has a gaint fluffy neon mutant cookie catcoon that makes stuff appear, if that isn't Unusual/unrealistic then I don't know what is XD) 

45. [/] They have a guardian spirit. (If you count Luna guiding her I guess~)

46. [ ] They have a 'special type' of soul. 

47. [ ] Their soul is not the same as them.

48. [ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.

49. [ ] Some part of their body glows. 

50. [ ] They have a rare/unusual name. (Suprising no, huh ponies have some weird names XD)

51. [ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.

52. [ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age.

53. [X] They are connected with a certain element. (Elements of Harmony, elements of harmony UwU)

54. [ ] They are connected with a certain animal.

55. [ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.

56. [] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. 

57. [ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood.

58. [ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.

59. [ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives.

60. [ ] They are hiding from someone/something.

61. [ ] They have a rare blood type.

62. [ ] They cry blood.

63. [ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.

64. [ ] They are from a different country to where they live.

65. [ ] They are very mysterious/dark.

66. [X] They are very lively/happy.

67. [ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. 

68. [X] They are very patient.

69. [ ] They are from a long line of assassins.

70. [/] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (She likes to wear her bow most often but she changes outfits and such according to season)

71. [ ] They have amnesia.

72. [ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them. 

73. [\ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. (ELEMENTSS)

74. [/ ] They are 'the chosen one'. (THE ELEMENTSSS)

75. [ ] They have insomnia.

Overall Points : 13
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Point Reduction: 0


Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::

1. [ ] They smoke.

2. [ ] They are an alcoholic. 

3. [ ] They are overweight. 

4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs. 

5. [ ] They have a short temper.  

6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others. 

7. [ ] They do not care much about others. 

8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless. 

9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

Total: 13


0-5 :: Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 

6-15 :: Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.  

16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 :: Mary-Sue

Please revise your character... NOW...!

IM AM BALANCED MUHAHAHHAHAHHAHA

ROUND TWO:
ROCKY THE BUNNY

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.

2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon. 

3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.

4. [ ] They are physically strong. 

5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour. 

6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour.

7. [ ] This eye colour happens to be white. 

8. [X] Their eyes change colour. (My eyes changed color and the OC corresponds to me so XD)

9. [ ] They have wings.

10. [X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. (Dem bunny ears)

11. [ ] They are immortal.

12. [ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.

13. [ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.

14. [ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

15. [ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc.

16. [ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.

17. [ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.

18. [ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. 

19. [ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.

20. [] They are a healer. 

21. [ ] They are from a very rich/royal family. 

22. [ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background. 

23. [ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.

24. [ ] They ran away from home.  

25. [ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

26. [ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. 

27. [/] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. (Bunny maybe? .w. A brown bunny over were I live is mythical to me so XD)

28. [ ] They never knew their parents.

29. [ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.

30. [ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. 

31. [X] They have lots of friends/no friends. 

32. [X] They are emo/cutesy. (SHES CUTE TO ME)

33. [X] They look much younger/older than they really are. (I have her as 13 but she looks to be 15 to me XD)

34. [ ] They are currently in a relationship.

35. [] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.

36. [ ] They have a mental disorder.

37. [ ] They have an emotional disorder. 

38. [ ] They struggle to stay sane.

39. [ ] They are a psycho.

40. [ ] They have multiple personalities.

41. [/] They are very intelligent. (DERP MOMENTOS)

42. [ ] They have hallucinations.

43. [X] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. (She can summon friends and bun buns if that counts UwU ) 

44. [ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.

45. [ ] They have a guardian spirit. 

46. [ ] They have a 'special type' of soul. 

47. [ ] Their soul is not the same as them.

48. [ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.

49. [ ] Some part of their body glows. 

50. [X] They have a rare/unusual name. (Not a lot of people have the name Rocky the way I spell it other than Rocky Balboa -w-)

51. [ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.

52. [ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age.

53. [ ] They are connected with a certain element.

54. [X] They are connected with a certain animal. (Well shes part bun bun so )

55. [ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.

56. [] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. 

57. [ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood.

58. [ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.

59. [ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives.

60. [ ] They are hiding from someone/something.

61. [ ] They have a rare blood type.

62. [ ] They cry blood.

63. [ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.

64. [ ] They are from a different country to where they live.

65. [ ] They are very mysterious/dark.

66. [X] They are very lively/happy.

67. [X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. (I Can turn from very happy one minute to complete anger in the next XD)

68. [] They are very patient.

69. [ ] They are from a long line of assassins.

70. [/] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (Hair tie?)

71. [ ] They have amnesia.

72. [ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them. 

73. [ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. 

74. [ ] They are 'the chosen one'.

75. [ ] They have insomnia.

Overall Points : 11.5
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Point Reduction: 0


Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::

1. [ ] They smoke.

2. [ ] They are an alcoholic. 

3. [ ] They are overweight. 

4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs. 

5. [ ] They have a short temper.  

6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others. 

7. [ ] They do not care much about others. 

8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless. 

9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

Total: 11.5


0-5 :: Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 

6-15 :: Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.  

16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 :: Mary-Sue

Please revise your character... NOW...!

BOTH OF MY CHARACTERS ARE BALANCED
AW YEAH
  • Listening to: "Turning over a new leaf' by mandopony
  • Reading: The screen
  • Watching: The screen
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: The Air
  • Drinking: The Air
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WingsThePhoenix Featured By Owner Edited May 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
>BOTH MY CHARACTERS ARE BALANCED
>Moonlight gets a 13
>Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

...^^;
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rockythebunny13 Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Still under the limit tho .w.
Some of the half I wasn't sure but blah
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